Week: 3 Space Pirate Trouble:
Our special cargo Cruiser fled from the pirates. We were going very fast and we were close to the nearest jumpgate to the core worlds but then… Boom! One of our main engines suddenly exploded and our speed went down drastically. The shields on our ship slowly fizzled out as the pirates barraged it with their weaponry. We tried to fight back, but to no avail. This is the end for us. Or that was what we thought… Fwash! A core patrol Destroyer ship appeared out of the jumpgate and turned the tables around. We had won.The cargo was safe.
You have used the prompt in a creative way. Well done. Your chose of precise words help to create images for the reader. Wow ... you certainly crammed a lot of ideas into your 100 words. Well done.
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