Sunday 11 March 2018
100 Word Challenge: Week: 7
On a fateful night, a shooting star fell from the sky… A child saw it hit the earth and went to investigate. But all he found was a teacup… a white teacup embedded in the ground. He inspected it and found a button. He pressed it. A door opened in the ground revealing a white slide. The child went sat down and sped into the darkness… A twist! A turn! A loop! And the cycle repeated until… Poof! The little boy appeared next to the teacup. Was it all a dream? Or was it real, who knows...
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Really great story Poen! I absolutely loved your imaginative plot line, and your story had some brilliant, vivid description. I also really liked your use of complex vocabulary, for example when you described the teacup as being "embedded" in the ground, and also how you ended with the three dots to keep the reader wanting more. Your description of the journey into the ground also created great pace in the story. Very well done!
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